special announcement: IT’S WIN IT WEDNESDAY!
So begins a new series at FightWrite.net. On win it Wednesday we will examine a fight scene from a book and by commenting on the post, you could win that book and/or a copy of my book, Fight Write: How to Write Believable Fight Scenes. The contest runs Oct 16 – 23. Leave a contact email or keep an eye out for the winner announcement Friday, Oct 25.
Our book for this Win It Wednesday is Tosca Lee’s, A Single Light, the sequel to The Line Between. We will look at what Tosca writes, a video of what might be taking place and what we as writers can learn from both.
A Single Light: Chapter – 10:25 P.M.
By the time we arrive on the east side of the building, Chase has the second guard pinned on his back ten feet from his rifle, arms locked around his neck and under an arm. The guard kicks like a half-squashed bug, tries to buck and roll. Chase just pivots with him.
Make your fight scene simple, relatable and serve your story. I know it is hard to not add in all the technical details especially if you have a specialized knowledge. You have to ask yourself if your reader would still understand the scene if they had never seen a fight, weapon or martial art in their life.
OK! NOW FOR THE STUFF!