In the process of formatting Fight Write, Round Two, some pages shifted automatically. As a result, some page numbers in the index are off. Here is the corrected index. Any books sold after June 20 should reflect that change. For everyone else, here is the corrected index. My apologies. And thank you so much for being so kind about it. You complete me.
I will make it a link as well as just post it here.
Fight Write, Round Two Edited Index
Fight Write, Round Two – Edited Index
Adrenaline
Impact on Injuries …20, 21, 22, 105, 178, 180
on dialogue … 65
on the sensory experience … 76
on Emotions … 75, 76
Fighting and … 186, 187, 226, 227
Amygdala …150 – 153, 296
Animals
Feeding … 136, 234
Horse(s)… 109 – 111, 119, 121 – 123, 135, 136, 142
As Multitools …237, 238
Symbolism and … 238
In Battle … 237, 238
Approach and coercion … 289
Archer stakes … 121
Area denial weapons … 121
Arming Sword … 116
Armor
Codpiece… 106
Cost … 104
Dragons and … 113
Helmet horror … 107, 108
Jousting … 109, 110
Mobility in … 105
Pieces of … 106, 107
Rust and … 132
Sounds of … 108
The Art of War … 45, 46, 140, 146
Autopsy
Cost of … 358
Report … 361, 362
Steps of … 359, 360
Types of … 358
Axes … 117, 118
Baggage train … 122, 135, 136
Ballista … 119, 120
Battering ram … 120
Tortoise (ram-tortoise) … 145
Battle, medieval
Defensive tactics… 146
Formation … 145
Bec de corbin … 118
Behavior
Baseline … 284, 287, 291 307, 318
Incongruent … 302
Pacifying … 301
Billmen … 121
Blood
Amount … 23, 29
Behavior, fluid … 273, 274
Character response to … 31
Match to genre … 27
Stain versus spatter … 273
Time period … 31, 32
Body language
Around the world … 314, 315
Facial expressions … 309
Limbic system and … 300
Mirroring … 307
Parts of the body … 311 – 313
Timing and clusters … 306
Bow
Bowmen … 119
Drawing … 119
Longbow … 119
Shortbow … 119
Boxing wraps … 200
Bullet … 21, 266
Ballistics … 268, 280
Fingerprint of … 280
Buckler … 116
Cadaveric spasm … 344
Caltrop … 121
Campaign season … 132
Castles
Dungeons … 128
Elements of … 126
Latrine … 127
Stairs … 127
Types of … 125, 126
Wall, breaching … 142, 143
Catapult … 120, 141
Cauliflower ear … 198, 226
Cause of death … 275, 355, 358, 362
Cavalry … 121, 122
Charge … 117
Chain of custody … 348
Character
Development … 6
Size … 15
Skill … 17
Strength … 16
Chemical/germ warfare … 142
Chevauchee … 134
Choke hold … 214, 256
Claymore … 116
Clinch … 211
Coercion … 289
Combat sports
Amateur fight … 204
Gym member types … 203, 204
Smoker … 205
Training gear … 200, 201
Concussion … 217, 226
Coup de main … 134
Crime scene
Cleaners, clothing … 367
Establishing … 340
Parameter … 340
Photographer … 341
Seven step protocol … 339
Sketch … 341
Staged … 342
Witnesses … 340
Crime scene investigators
Clothing … 269, 341
Criminal profile, creating … 348
Disorganized offenders … 351
Organized offenders … 349
Crossbow … 118
Bolt … 118
Crossbowmen … 122
CSI effect
Definition … 263
Impact on jurors … 264, 265
on writers … 265, 266
Cut-man … 220, 223
Dagger … 116
Deadly force … 255
Deception … 360, 361
Deceptive language … 320 – 324
Uncovering … 325
Decomposition … 360, 361
Blood-borne pathogens … 366
Gases … 366
Smell of … 367
Dialogue in fight scene examples … 66, 69
Disassociation … 76, 156
Double- leg takedown … 212 (Ben, on page 212, under steps of double-leg #3, line 1, change “hand” to “hands”)
Dragon … 113, 240
Duper’s delight … 310
Dysentery … 18, 104, 137
Escalade … 143
Evidence
Ballistics … 280
Blood … 268
Pattern analysis … 270, 272
Blue light … 270
Cell phone … 269
Direct … 346
DNA … 277, 278, 264, 265
Fingerprints … 278, 279
Gathering … 348
Indirect … 347, 348
IP address … 270
Polygraph … 272
Postmortem … 275
Searching for … 344
Facial expression … 305, 309
Asymmetrical/contradicting … 309
Duper’s delight … 310
Microexpressions … 310
Universal … 309
Falchion … 116
Fight
Definition of … 3, 4
Why … 14
Location … 14, 15
Who … 15, 17
Fighting
Men and women, differences … 246
Men … 250
Movie tropes … 254, 255
Women … 251
Two against one … 256
Fight camp … 206
Fight/flight … 296
Freeze … 243, 297
Flight … 248, 298
Fight … 246, 248, 296 – 299
Fight promoter … 204, 205
Fingerprint, types … 278, 279
IAFIS … 279
Stolen … 280
Fire, attacking with … 140, 141
Forensic science
Definition … 263
Myths … 266 – 270
Flail … 118
Glaive … 116
Gloves, combat sports … 200
Gore … 27, 28, 32
Grappling … 213
Back mount … 213
Back mount escape … 214
Figure four … 213
Guard pass … 213
Mount … 213
Rear naked choke … 214
Tap, snap, nap … 215
Great sword … 116
Gym rules … 199, 200
Halberd … 117
Halo effect … 324
Head gear, combat sports … 200
Injuries
Adrenaline and … 20, 21
Blood, 22, 23, 29
Bloody nose … 30, 180
Concussion/TBI … 22, 23, 189, 201, 217, 226
Different body parts … 30, 31
Healing time … 20, 22
Long term effects … 23
MMA fight … 226
Sparring … 189
Infantry … 122
Insect activity, decomposition … 360, 361
Interview, criminal … 283
Closed questions … 287
Open questions … 283
Preparing for … 289, 290
Techniques for … 290 – 293
Isopraxism … 297
Joust … 109, 110
Dangers of … 111
Horse … 110
Rules of … 112
Knight … 103, 105, 109, 116, 121, 122, 123
Knock out … 216
Duration of … 217
Ladders … 120, 143, 144
Land holdings … 128, 130
Leg strikes
Assisted knee … 211, 212
Round kick … 211
Level change … 210, 212
Limbic language … 300
Lie
Detector test … 272
Flight response … 298
Half-truth … 288
Versus deception … 317
Life recall … 10
Luminol … 275
Mace … 116
Machicolations/murder hole … 127
Medical examiner … 344, 356, 357, 360 – 362
Autopsy report … 361
Versus coroner … 356
Medieval encampment … 137, 138, 153
Medieval tournament … 108, 109
Mercenaries … 122, 133
Mind virus … 285
Miranda rights … 286
Mirror neurons … 7, 8
Impact on reader … 11
Impact on story … 8, 9
Impact on writer … 7, 8
MMA, history … 198
Moat … 126, 127, 142, 143
Monsters
Classic … 229
Fighting against … 230, 231
Making your own … 230
Mouth guard … 200
Murder versus homicide … 276
Oppositional energy … 175, 187
Outworks … 134, 135
Pacing
Examples …56 – 59
Finding your style … 59
Perp nap, criminal … 308
Personality disorders … 328, 329
Antisocial … 335, 336
Borderline … 331, 332
Narcissistic … 333, 334
Paranoid … 329, 330
Pinocchio effect … 318
Pioneers … 122
Point of view … 75, 232, 242
Polearm … 116, 117
Pre-fight ritual … 222
Psychopath versus sociopath … 327, 337
Punch
Cross … 210
Jab … 210
Haymaker … 250
Overhand … 210
Physics of … 16
Purification rituals … 151
Question, types
Bait … 286
Character response to … 320 – 324
Compound … 287
Presumptive … 283
Vague … 288
What-else … 285
Quicklime … 120
Rigor mortis … 343, 344
Ripening the fruit … 134
Sappers … 122, 143, 146
Sensory details
Five things exercise … 77
Sickness
Camp … 137
Syphilis … 137
Shin guards … 200
Siege machines … 118, 119, 138
Engineer/gynour … 122, 142, 144
Siege tower … 120, 144
Smiths … 123
Sparring versus drilling … 185, 186
Spear … 117
Spearmen … 122
Spies … 146, 147
Sprawl … 213
Survival mode (fight/flight) … 150, 151
Behavior in … 247, 248
Body language and … 295
Sword
Blood groove … 177
Drilling techniques … 176
Footwork … 169, 170, 174
Gripping … 162
Ready position/stance … 163, 167
Sparring … 167, 168
Strike pattern … 170 – 173
Swordsmen … 123
Time of death … 441 – 343 356, 359, 376
Insect activity … 360
Lividity … 343, 360
Toxicology … 276, 356
Trauma … 4, 147 – 153, 246, 307, 335
Trebuchet … 120
Troop movement … 131
Undermine … 143, 145
Warhammer … 118
Weaponry
Edged weapons, common … 116
Impact … 117
Melee … 115, 116
Missiles … 118
Weigh-ins … 206, 219
Weight cut … 204, 206
Purpose … 206
